Broadjam Artist: Pete Higginson
Song: Dreambody
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The strong point of this song is the chorus. Don’t call for me.Don’t crawl for me.Don’t bleed for me.Don’t plead for me.Very catchy lyrics. The classic “I don’t need anybody song”. The verses have a unique imagery all their own. Nice instrumentation and vocal performance.
Constructive Comments: Dream body. The accent in the word body is on the first syllable but you place it on the second, which, I feel, is a bit awkward. To make the song shorter, you could edit the instrumental section at the end, Also the intro. I had a hard time discerning the words in the first line. Your lyrics are all over the place and kind of went over my head…but maybe that’s because it’s new age/meditative (and I’m out of my genre here). What is the song actually saying in the verses? I get the chorus.