Broadjam Artist: CWMullins
Song: I Was Me and You Were You
Reviewer: paul sandberg
Positive Comments: I liked the groove established here. The lyric are solid and the hook works well.
Constructive Comments: I hate being negative as I know who you are via having reviewed another of your songs – the same things apply here – I would sing this the verses of this song in a lower register for starters. As it stands I feel that the 3rd line of the verses could use a completely different melody, playing off the chord changes instead of adhering to them.”When I think back” feels rushed.The guitar solo is pretty weak – sounds like you were trying to be creative and ended up with no flow or cohesion and some passing notes that didn’t fit.I would have faded out the song much sooner, as there is a serious breakdown in the bass and the ending is very weak and disjointed. Once again there are the roots of a very nice song here – really like the groove to this – perhaps trying singing this more as a spoken piece and not so sing song with the melody.