The Man I Used To Be by Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: The Man I Used To BeReviewer: paul sandbergPositive Comments: interesting lyrics cool shadings and nice bit of sax work. Constructive Comments: I like the effect on the vocals at the beginning, but feel the son…

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: The Man I Used To Be

Reviewer: paul sandberg

Positive Comments: interesting lyrics cool shadings and nice bit of sax work.

Constructive Comments: I like the effect on the vocals at the beginning, but feel the song would be more effective if it was dropped after the first verse – that way it would further emphasize the “reflection” aspect of the lyrics. The poppy instrumental breaks seem to come from a different song entirely – breaking the mood of the song for me.Some of the vocal lines seem a bit out of rhythmthe fade out is quite abrupt – I would have liked to hear the sax take over at the end for a long fade.