Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Bubbalicious (Electronic)
Reviewer: B.Still
Positive Comments: I LIKED THE SONG, BUT I DID NOT LOVE IT, SORRY TO SAY. THE INTRO WAS HEADED TO A BEAUTIFUL PLACE, BUT UPON LISTENING TO IT A FEW TIMES, I FELT IT WAS BIT FUSSY. TOO MANY NOTES TO QUICKLY. IT MAY BE THAT YOU WERE PLAYING AGAINST A CLCK TRACK. BY PLAYING FREESTYLE AND MORE SLOWLY IN THE BEGINNING UNTIL YOU GET TO 17 SECONDS, YOU COULD MAKE THAT KICK IN MORE POWERFULLY AND MORE EMOTIONALLY. THE PRODUCTION WAS VERY GOOD AS WAS THE RECORDING.
Constructive Comments: I DID NOT FIND THE SONG TO HAVE A UNIQUE QUALITY TO IT. THAT MAY HAVE BEEN ON PURPOSE. IT DID SOUND TO ME LIKE MANY SONGS I’VE HEARD BEFORE.I BELIEVE THAT CHANGING THE SONIC TEXTURE OF THE INSTRUMENTS WOULD HELP THAT OUT. ADDITIONALLY, THE CHORD PROGRESSION AND PHRASING SEEMED TO BE VERY FAMILIAR, TOO FAMILIAR TO BE VERY INTERESTING. AT 1 MIN/10 SECONDS I’D LIKE TO SEE THE PERCUSSION EVOLVE A BIT. OVERALL A GOOD TUNE. KEEP AT IT…YOU’VE GOT TALENT