
Broadjam Artist: John Walradt
Song: Far From Home
Reviewer: Mitch Siegal
Positive Comments: Your lyrics are actually very good.
Constructive Comments: A bit too much stereo separation in the guitars. Need to blend the vocals a little better with the instrumentation..try using backing vocals and harmonies. The last guitar chord in the song was how all the instrumentation should have sounded. Hi-e this gives you a little help. Otherwise keep writing and honing in your craft!