Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Little Bird
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is the kind of song that makes you think about some of life’s deep questions. Makes you want to listen again and again so you get the whole meaning of the writer’s metaphor. I like the bird theme and how it ties in with the songwriter and the condition of the hearts of people in this world with so much evil. Yet the writer brings in many positive images as well. The melody is beautiful execution of guitar flawless. Love the harmonic! Background keys/synthesizer augments the production in a lovely way. Vocal is expressed with intensity that makes the listener want to really hear what he is singing. “Rope that’s tied to nothing on the other side” Best lyric in the song.
Constructive Comments: Ease out the ending a little more gently. Shadow. Where is the accent? On the first syllable. In your song? I think the second. Chorus – hard to pick up the word ROPE. I would definitely like to hear more of your work. I can imagine this song being sung in a listening room. Or a song circle at a festival. Great job!