A Reason – by Serneka

Broadjam Artist: SernekaSong: A Reason -Reviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: Cool, original introduction. Love the percussion and keys. Nice holding out the door lyric/note. Put me down push me around – good lyric. Pillow soaked in tears – ano…

Serneka

Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: A Reason –

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Cool, original introduction. Love the percussion and keys. Nice holding out the door lyric/note. Put me down push me around – good lyric. Pillow soaked in tears – another good word picture. You can feel the hurt in this song – convincing vocal. Nice fade out ending.

Constructive Comments: Post your lyrics, please. I had a hard time figuring out: was this a alto female voice? Or a male vocal? Some kind of a crossover voice? Help me out here. Not good/understood – I’d work on that lyric. It’s a little lame after the put me down push me around. 2:56 stop/pause is rather long. It didn’t make sense to me (why you did that).