Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The Other Reverse Gear / Smooth Jazz
Reviewer: Bill Dake
Positive Comments: Like the rhythm and tempo changes.
Constructive Comments: This really needs a melody line. The basic chord changes and rhythm changes could work better if you had a melodic line running through them to tie the piece together. Some drums would also help the flow. You’ve got some good ideas here, they just need to be more refined.