
Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: Beating Heart
Reviewer: Lisa Repac
Positive Comments: Catchy rythm here! Very danceable beat. You knew exactly what sound you were going for. I can see you had a story in this song. The lyrics are heartfelt and the theme of the song is relatable.
Constructive Comments: The song is a story, but some of the lyrics were a bit hard to make out, and I think a little work on phrasing would help. I think a little more harmony would round out your vocals. I liked the tempo you chose, very relaxed, very mellow. I think you may need to look at the structure of the song a little bit. I think if some of your verses were combined, they would have been more impactful, and as a result, your chorus would have been a little less repetitive. Overall, a laid back honest song.