Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: A Shot of Luck
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Shot of luck and a bottle of love is good ! Roll with that. Your voice is there I think you have a good idea.
Constructive Comments: I would drop the bb king and ALL of the down feeling stuff. Save that for a different song. Stay focused on the “shot of luck and bottle of love”. everybody can relate to that. shot of luck and bottle of luck is your hook. stay focused on that and re-write. Drop EVERYTHING that is negative. You can do it !