Amends by Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: AmendsReviewer: John Kelly WilsonPositive Comments: I think the lyrics are good, and the concept is good. You have talent. But the song needs to go somewhere. It stays in the same place without a hook. So it seems to …

Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Amends

Reviewer: John Kelly Wilson

Positive Comments: I think the lyrics are good, and the concept is good. You have talent. But the song needs to go somewhere. It stays in the same place without a hook. So it seems to drag some. But with some work and stepping up the tempo a touch, with a hook, it could be good.

Constructive Comments: Needs a better production. Vocals could be better and song is a little too slow. Needs a better hook because it just stays in the same place. Also, the double tracking of the vocals doesn’t work well.