
Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: Submissive One
Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: Firstly this a beautiful song. Nice intro. Very catchy melody. The chorus with the block vocal is sublime. The singer is first class, an tremendous singer. The lyrics are simple but effective. The song has a great vibe.
Constructive Comments: I’ve marked down the instrumentation and the arrangement because I think that some of the synth sounds don’t really suit the song, particularly on the chorus, where the synth is fighting the vocal. Also a less bombastic drum/percussion track would work better. I really like this song, but feel that in terms of arrangement and instrumentation a more delicate touch would bring out the inherent beauty of the melody. Hope these comments make sense!