Broadjam Artist: HAYWARD A. FRANKS
Song: THIS SIDE OF THE GRASS
Reviewer: Matthew Stemme
Positive Comments: Grabs you from first chord! Nice vocals. Good Chorus. I like how you get to the chorus quickly. Overall lyrics are great. “putting yesterday behind me” ‘could be a nice first bridge line?
Constructive Comments: Really good chorus and bridge. Just wondering if the bridge could stand out more. Maybe you could find more brevity in the bridge that may help it stand out more.