I IMAGINE by Pete Papageorge

Broadjam Artist: Pete PapageorgeSong: I IMAGINEReviewer: MCarollShawPositive Comments: The instrumentation was good. Constructive Comments: If the lyrics were not so specific, I believe the song might possibly be less voyeuristic. For example, if some…

Pete Papageorge

Broadjam Artist: Pete Papageorge
Song: I IMAGINE

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: The instrumentation was good.

Constructive Comments: If the lyrics were not so specific, I believe the song might possibly be less voyeuristic. For example, if some of the “her’s” were removed. “the cottage” instead of “her cottage” “that flows through auburn hair” instead of “flowing through her auburn hair.” etc. Instead of “Feels a little strange, A strange kind of love” why not say “A strange kind of love, But is it love or lust”. The rhyme scheme wouldn’t be affected.