Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Reviewer: N.Jones, Protilius Productions
Positive Comments: It’s a Jesus song. If you like Jesus you’ll love this song. If you’re not a fan? You still might like this song… The performances are solid enough to be appreciated, I enjoyed the flutters for the second chorus as well, interesting arrangement choice. Good addition. It’s soft and steady… Ideal for a religious documentary or a film that involves religious people in the character line up.
Constructive Comments: Your instrumentation set is through and through country. I’d recommend changing genres to folk or country. Your arrangement feels rushed. Always singing. Take a moment to feel the music and allow it to breathe in its own section. Develop an instrumental bridge. Take a moment to breathe between transitions. Perhaps consider moving away from the four chord formula and developing some changes as you progress through the song. People tend to get bored if you do the same chords and melodies over and over again. Your enemy here is repetition. Also… As much as I love the good lord… I fear the lyrical content here might not gravitate to all listeners. Not telling you to stop… Just suggesting if you can find a new way to say the same thing? You might be able to sneak a heathen or two into your fan base. (Smiles warmly.)