Broadjam Artist: Nick Coleman and Cole Crawford Hurst
Song: A Letter To Linda From El Paso
Reviewer: Bob Bentley
Positive Comments: Hi, I really liked this song. The tune is familiar – but so is most country music – but the way the chords work together is a little different to the norm. The vocal is spot on accurate and the demo works very well with just guitar chord backing because it allows the listener to hear the story.Linda and window is a clever rhyme which could be corny but i think it works well!!Good luck with this fine country song.
Constructive Comments: Only one comment, and that is just my personal opinion: The line “It just won’t shine for me as bright” is a bit of a mouthful and sounds just a little awkward to me. Something like “but for me not as bright” would scan more easily and still make the point. Otherwise, I really like the song and wish you luck with it.