
Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: A Reason –
Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: I like the funky intro. The heavy drums, piano and the bass with the organ weaving in and out works really well. I particularly like the drum shuffle. The instrumental pull back at 2.38 is very effective. Strong vocal deliver. The song has great swagger, almost like some of Steely Dan’s stuff.
Constructive Comments: I would have liked more melodic movement. I feel the melody follows the same pattern for too long. It sounds like a series of verses which build tension without the release of a chorus or a bridge which would take the song in another direction, before taking it back to the main theme. I think the vocal could be higher in the mix. I like the overall sound of the song but I think its structure could be better.