Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Manners Rap
Reviewer: JllVMINVTI
Positive Comments: This was a fun little jingle you made! Haha, I was smiling the whole time with how creative it was and the writing was witty and inclusive, while still being educational and informative. The tongue-in-cheek “manner” of this song reminded me of the type of PSA songs that I would have to listen to at public schools as a child. Overall not bad.
Constructive Comments: Things I would suggest improving on may be the instrumentation and the quality of arrangement. Each verse kind starts and stops around each hook, and there is no clean blending of the two. This interrupts the flow of it being a causal song, but for what it is, I think it is pretty decent. Maaaayybe, rewrite the chorus and flesh it out a bit more to make it more impactful and memorable. Also, try avoiding stock loops and samples in the future, as these can sound cheapen your overall sound.