Broadjam Artist: Dave Schnur
Song: Point of View
Reviewer: Barry Osbourn
Positive Comments: great guitar playing, and your vocal pitch is good
Constructive Comments: well theres a few things, I think you need a different beat for the song, something with 8th notes on the high hat to keep the tempo going and it needs to swing s little and I think you’d find the whole song come alive and flow better, it just feels like its dragging as bit the way it is, and the lyrics might need a little work, they’re not bad and I get your story but maybe don’t be so concerned with getting all the facts in and use a little more imagery, color it up a bit, its a little dry. , But you do have a good voice.