Broadjam Artist: Ashley Martin
Song: Black-Hearted Cowboy
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The songwriter tells a good story…one of loneliness, child abuse, hopelessness, and he tells it clearly and well. The vocals are crystal clear and the delivery good. There are some good, clever, original lyrics and rhymes in there.
Constructive Comments: The performance, though good and clear, lacks a certain amount of passion and emotional connection with the song. It’s hard for me to pinpoint it. But black-hearted ought to sound…blacker? Tougher? Meaner? Is he black-hearted because he is evil? Or because his life is one of a loser? Just some random thoughts. It’s a good song, but it could be better. You have a great story line…just looking for something more. The instruments sounded kind of synthy to me.