Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: I’m So Lonely
Reviewer: Jeff Maguire
Positive Comments: Interesting idea ” I’m so lonely when your around “, moody and introspective. Definitely creates a mental image of some guy sitting in a smoke filled bar full of people but completely alone.
Constructive Comments: I think you have the basis for a really good song but overall the arrangement and recording need some attention. For example, I’d consider making it a little more of a traditional blues form, rather than two chords repeated which change after about a minute twenty for no apparent reason . The two sections don’t sound integral to one another, so maybe either an actual 12 or 16 bar form, or an actual chorus. Just sounds incomplete. For that matter, it could simply repeat tow chords the whole song, but change dynamic with instrumentation, melody . and rhythm.