Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Bifocal Blues
Reviewer: Hattie Wilcox Music
Positive Comments: I heard this in gospel blues category and I don’t think it fits here. I think a much better fit in the unique column. Singer is right on pitch, emotive with good feeling. Lyrics are the strongest component and reflect a lot of effort and writer-conscienciousness. My ratings mostly based on fact I felt song was in wrong category. All best, Hattie
Constructive Comments: Change genre for more helpful feedback. Humor is really touch. Talking at front and inside song is very hard to pull off and not make people wish it wasn’t there, so look at that and make sure you really want to include it. I am a big fan of Alan Sherman and Ray Stevens. You might find listening to them interesting, if not inspiring.