Stay Away From the River by David J. Hentosh

Broadjam Artist: David J. HentoshSong: Stay Away From the RiverReviewer: Chris FordPositive Comments: Good idea and hook. I like the instrumentation, especially the guitar. Lyrics and story have potential. Melody has good potential.Constructive Comment…

David J. Hentosh

Broadjam Artist: David J. Hentosh
Song: Stay Away From the River

Reviewer: Chris Ford

Positive Comments: Good idea and hook. I like the instrumentation, especially the guitar. Lyrics and story have potential. Melody has good potential.

Constructive Comments: My only concern would be the vocals. Singer has a good voice for this style, but vocal presentation seems too tense and technical. You have to relax to sing the Blues.