Broadjam Artist: Teri Feaser
Song: When The Moon Comes Crashing Down
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: I really liked the intro to this song, and was a happy surprise when lyrics kicked in. I thought it was going to be a 4 minute instrumental. I thought it was well arranged and constructed. The singer is not the greatest singer in the world, but she does the job. She put a lot of life and energy and herself into singing and that is a huge plus being able to do that. I also liked that whoever mixed this song did not make the mistake of adding eight tons of reverb to the vocals. They added just enough to help her sound better instead of too much trying to make up for what is not naturally there.
Constructive Comments: There is 5 seconds of dead air at the end of this recording. AS much as I liked the intro, the ending did not do much for me. The fade out was adequate, just wish some more thought had gone into it to make it more poignant.I liked the lyrics, but there were about three or four places where they could have been improved. It was like you got tired of trying to refine those parts and just settled on the best words you had instead of continuing to hunt for the best words for the song.This didn’t really come across as an electronic song, I felt like it was more pop-rock, and actually I think the style of voice of the vocalist is best suited for a more rock based sound.