Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: My Heart Belongs To You
Reviewer: CodeSwitcher
Positive Comments: Perfect recording, great voice, good instrumentation, love the female harmony. The melody is memorable and the delivery was totally believable. This kind of uptempo positive song is the best for the market, so you should get some placements. Well done. Melody really stuck in my head.
Constructive Comments: There is what is called a “pronoun shift” in the first line of the chorus. You say “her” and then the rest of the chorus is sung to “you.” Makes it sound like there is another woman you are trying to tell that you love her besides the one you are singing to. Simple fix. Change her to you.