Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Orphans Of War (Carola/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Phyllis Sanchez
Positive Comments: Wow. Intense, mysterious, interesting instrumentation. I like the intensity of the music arrangement, as well as the intensity, of the lyrics. The low sound of the drums, adds to the overall feeling. It certainly grabbed my interest. The lyrics, are also ominous, and heartbreaking. Also… good production/mix. Love the instrumentation. I could see this used for a documentary, movie, or TV drama, on the war. I look forward to hearing more of your music,
Constructive Comments: I listened to this five times, as I really wanted to take it in, plus……. I find it a very interesting song. The one thing I would critique, would be to watch the vocal intonation a little bit more closely, at “the widows try to help” and “I’m no longer, one of those guys”. Good going