Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Illinois (Selsky/Dunkle)
Reviewer: xchak gearz
Positive Comments: The 3rd hook towards the end (not the very end but just before the very end) where he says take me home was the best part of the track The intro, verses and chorus need some work.
Constructive Comments: The arrangement was ok, and the vocal could be mixed a little bit better, because some times it hard to understand the lyrics/words. With some work, I think it could be more listenable and interesting. Also at times the track seemed a little bit busy music wise, and could be made a bit more simple, and that would bring out the lead vocal more.