Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: That’s All She Wrote
Reviewer: Veronica Beltran Hintz
Positive Comments: Very nice song with clean recording. I like the lyrics. I also like how the pace of the lyrics speed up and add variety to the song.
Constructive Comments: I have a couple of suggestions I think will make this very good song even better. The chorus seems a little weak. One thing I noticed in your song is the melody tends to go to low notes. I think on the chorus words ” GOODBYE NOTE ” the notes sung should go up and reach a peak. Also on ” GOODBYE, …THAT’S ALL SHE WROTE” Another suggestion is put just a little country twang in the vocals. Your vocals are very nice but need a little more country sound to classify this a country/contemporary .I hope my opinion helps. Best wishes!