Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dial Tune (Pilgrim/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Bob Stump
Positive Comments: I like the setting , old phone and piano, the old house etc
Constructive Comments: there are a lot of dead grandmother songs out there and it’s hard to be unique. maybe the story could have been taken further.”the piano still sitting there with her old shawl across the bench I could still hear those old songs as if she were in the room today” .It was through a childs’ eyes and fond memories that inspired this . I get that u miss them .I was hoping for more story and life ,rather than passing and sorrow. Intro too long , chorus and hooks are hard to hang your hat on. Is it this old phone or is it takes me back etc I don’t know , I hope this is helpful- and remember it is only one critique – good luck and write on!