Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Pow Pow Pow
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: I liked the music, the lyrics, and the vocals, but unfortunately I think this is one of those situations where I think the individual parts are better then the whole.
Constructive Comments: While I liked the three main components as I said in the positive comment section, I did not think they went well together. The music was good and I liked the melody, but I didn’t think it had any relationship to the lyrics and I didn’t think it complimented the sound and tone of the vocals. it’s a shame, I liked all the different parts, but when they came together they just lacked unity and cohesion.Maybe changing the tone of the guitar would change that for me. With the high pitch of the vocals, may I suggest listening to some “Blondie” songs to get some inspiration as to what guitar sounds best go with vocals in that high range. I am sure there are some other good female high pitched vocalists that you could give a listen to for inspiration on how best to accompany your sound, but “Blondie” was the only one I could think of off the top of my head.Good luck, you have a lot of potential.