Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Joy
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: I think there is a good song in there, because I think you have a pretty decent 3 minute song in there that you have sadly stretched to 6:06
Constructive Comments: You really need to learn to edit yourself. You have a hundred ideas crammed in there which robs the song of continuity. And just because you have a hundred ideas does not mean they are all good ones. The wees at the beginning and ending are not good and need to be cut. Sounds like smurfs having a party. If you just got rid of those two parts you would be down to about 4:40. I liked about two-thirds of the lyrics, so I suggest making some cuts to further cut the run time. the last 2 minutes before the wees kick in again are just repeats of previous lyrics maybe just cutting the repeat would be an easier way. You really need to learn to edit yourself. It is a hard thing to do, it is a hard thing to be told you need to do, but I am telling you emphatically that you need to learn that skill. This is a hot mess when I feel fairly confident that there is a good song in there, and that is a shame.