Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: The Clock Burned Down
Reviewer: Anxious Rabbit
Positive Comments: like the blend of orchestral feel mixed with synth vibe – almost leaning towards a rock opera feel – some good dynamics
Constructive Comments: This could be a much stronger song. If it were mixed properly / professionally – Some parts were over powering other parts – Mastering would help tremendously – $100 to $300 depending – And either drop the vocals into Melodnye and sort them out, as the vocalist was pitchy [ flat on important notes ] or hire a pro demo singer [ no shame in that ] – And maybe tighten up lyrical metaphors – felt a little too cryptic – unless that’s what you were going for – to allow the listener to interpret [ the basic idea’s there – a break up ] This song has some real legs but it still could be so much stronger with a few tweaks. Some good musicianship!!