Broadjam Artist: Junior Murrell
Song: Are Your One of Us
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: This was well performed and recorded. Most instrumental songs just feel like a 1 minute clip repeated 4 times, was nice to hear more thought go into the arrangement then that. Managed to not get overly repetitive for most of the song.
Constructive Comments: The start of the song is too abrupt, generally you want 1 to 4 beats of empty space at the start of the recording. Did not like the end, whenever I hear a fade out at the end of a longer instrumental it just feels like the musician got bored with his song and didn’t know how to end it and just wanted it over. wasn’t sure how much I liked the instrument that comes in at 2:21, I didn’t hate it, just not sure how much I liked it. Was good to introduce a new sound there, just not completely convinced the sound you introduced was the right choice. I think I would have liked it more if it was 30 seconds shorter, by the very end I wasn’t hearing anything new. Of course maybe if you took that last 30 seconds and made an impactful ending to the song it would change that perception.