Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Untethered
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: You recorded your piano well. That’s all I got.
Constructive Comments: You… absolutely… abused… the dramatic… pause… in this… song. There must… be… about a hundred… dramatic… pauses… in… this composition. If… A… dramatic pause… occurs… every… other… second… there… is… nothing… dramatic… about it. It would… be… interesting… to see… what… this… song… would… sound like… if… you… took… out… all… the… needless… and… meaningless… and overused… dramatic… pauses.