Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dial Tune (Pilgrim/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song has an interesting subject matter. It’s a son or grandson reminiscing on memories of a beloved grandparent, specifically shooting off of 2 things, the phone and the piano. Creative subject matter. Nice harmonies at end. Great use of phone sound effects!
Constructive Comments: This song seems more folk than pop to me. When I heard the intro, I expected one thing to happen, but the vocal presentation seemed a bit heavy and incongruent with the instrumental. The song just seemed a little over-produced to me. I had to consult the lyrics to make sure I was understanding what was going on. I understood better with the second listen. Limit the use of phone sound effects (too much of a good thing). I think you could possibly shorten this song. That may not be necessary because I don’t think your goal was to make this a commercial success, which is totally okay.