Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dial Tune (Pilgrim/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Marie Jarreau
Positive Comments: I like the hook and the instrumental parts, I love the sound of the dialing telephone! The premise of the song: dialing the familiar number that brings back of memories of Grampa/Gramma, the piano are beautifully original. I’d like to hear a bit more of a lyrical connection between the vocals and the melody. Ref. the production, I feel the instrumental portion is too far out-front of the vocal. I’d like to hear more of the vocal “backed-up” by the music. Yes I would welcome more songs by this artist – nice voice from what I can hear, good music accompaniment, lovely imaginative song.
Constructive Comments: In production, bring up the volume of the vocal track, back-off on the music a bit. Maybe that would satisfy what I ‘feel’ is missing in the lyrical connection. Otherwise I think this could be a very nice song.