Broadjam Artist: Buc Williams
Song: REAL DEAL
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: This has potential. The hook is great. The lyrics are close
Constructive Comments: The song doesn’t flow like it could. V 1 drags and should not. I would forget the “Pre Corus” Keep it quick.Try this I bet you’ve heard, every pick up line.From do you come here often, to what’s your sign.Well You won’t hear, that from me, cause I ain’t no wanna-a-be.I’m the real deal…….etc.Continue that way all the way through to keep the tempo interesting oh and change to Light me up watch me “glow”. Your getting lit up after all !Good Luck ! Dale Robbins