Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: you can keep the ring
Reviewer: Randal Dunkle
Positive Comments: I like the piano and the vocals as well – I really like the lyrics as well – sounds a little like Eric Carmen.
Constructive Comments: I like the song but I would change a few things, first I would change the hook to “instead of you can keep the ring” to the name of a girl like Mary Jane – I would also add drums and a bass guitar to give the song a little more depth – best wishes!