Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Heart Of Blue (Ritchie/Dunkle)
Reviewer: amy abernathy
Positive Comments: I liked the emotion you put behind it, very touching. I thought it was a sweet song. A few little things will make the chorus pop a little. Good job.
Constructive Comments: I get what you trying to do with it, but you have I still and I’m still in almost every line, I think it needs a variation from what you Have in the chorus. Here in love with you, would work instead of I’m still in love with you. You have still in your chorus, so save that for the chorus.