
Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Tomorrows Children
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song is a plea to listen to the children in order to prevent more trouble. Take care of them when they are little. Sung with passion.
Constructive Comments: Instrumentation and arrangement sounds like a computer-generated loop. Not enough variation. Lyrics have a good message but seemed hard to understand and follow till I re-read them a couple of times. Work on freshness in your rhymes and a catchy melody/hook.