Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: Malt liquor blooze
Reviewer: Jeff Maguire
Positive Comments: Hyper psycho I’m drunk off my ass blues, many good ideas here. Sounds like an outtake of Chile Peppers rehearsal after they drank way to much Tequila.
Constructive Comments: Hard to critique this, there are good ideas and I expect there is a good song in there but the execution is lacking. To start with the lead riff is to loud , the drums are to loud, and it’s hard to make out the vocals because they are down in the mix. I think that would be a decent starting point, and maybe rethinking the arrangement. It seems like a Red Hot Chile Peppers vibe, so it might be a good idea to use some track of there’s as the starting point of a way to get a coherent song out of it. IOW … listen to the way they structure and perform a tune and imitate it, then little by little, bring in your own thing.