Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Running out of Jungle
Reviewer: Spiderhound
Positive Comments: I like your experimental approach and willingness to explore new textures and sounds.
Constructive Comments: The beat is very repetitive and lacking in dynamics. The entire piece is a horizontal arrangement which in my opinion would benefit from some vertical composition techniques. Silence is an incredible composition tool and I think it could help by inserting some moments of silence so the ears can reset and you can help grab the listener’s attention by focusing on adding more figures to the composition (right now the entire song is ground in need of strategically placed figures). Check out “figure-ground” perception and consider adding this technique to your music compositions.