Shadowy Cover by Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana PotthoffSong: Shadowy CoverReviewer: Massimo CarolaPositive Comments: Really dramatic, deep and dangerous, at times. The A minor aeolian mode seems appropriate for the song. A bit more contrasting elements would help.Constructive…

Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Shadowy Cover

Reviewer: Massimo Carola

Positive Comments: Really dramatic, deep and dangerous, at times. The A minor aeolian mode seems appropriate for the song. A bit more contrasting elements would help.

Constructive Comments: The minor thirds in the lower register make the sound muddy in the beginning. The notes are fine even if there is no harmonic evolution sometimes. And you should try to use more the volume and expression in the playing to reach a more credible performance. Is a bit short and in the same time needs a more frequent development of the parts. There are a few hooks that don’t get the development I was expecting.