Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: Welcome to this world of mine
Reviewer: Massimo Carola
Positive Comments: Even in this simplistic form, the song has something interesting. Still, it needs some work to make it easier to listen too. Please don’t underestimate the importance of the comping.
Constructive Comments: The recording is the thing I would work the most. The voice is overly sibilant and the words are unclear. The form of the song is too repetitive and gets boring. There is no development and no payoff. I would start again by analyzing the lyrics and using the form and arrangement to enhance it.