Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Just One More Day
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Really sweet guitar intro that sets the mood perfectly. The vocals come in strong and compelling–what a nice vocal timbre and you have the vocal well recorded and right where it needs to be in the mix. The second harmony parts that come in are good. The halting “won’t…you…stay” is very effective. The instrumental arrangement and performances are all very strong–they totally support the vocal and lyrics.
Constructive Comments: fix that flat note on “there’s a *chance* for us””our love can’t end this way” this is too cliche IMO And there’s a lot like it that’s the same, and you can predict what the next line is going to be. I really think you need to rework this so it’s not quite so cliche.The high synth part is a bit whiny.Nice work!!