Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Flying On Back To L.A.X. (Rock – Alternative, Pop – Adult Cont.)
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Tasty guitar tone and lead playing from the Larry Carlton school. The vocal is unique and compelling–it reminds me of Judy Miller. That change to minor at :47 is so sweet. The drummer is kicking out a really grooving 4/4 with the snare behind the beat–this really swings. Great overall production and mix here.
Constructive Comments: Vocal has too much reverb esp with the high EQ of the tail. The vocal should come up in the mix more. Some of the lyrics are too cliche and vague. Make this a more concrete story with images that present a real story rather than just summary of “something was wrong” etc. Other than that it rocks!