Broadjam Artist: John Evans
Song: Only in Quiet Times
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: What a lovely instrumental introduction, really seductive! And I love your opening lines are great – “The people who knew me well, are queuing up to speak” – this line really TALKS! You have a good turn of phrase generally. I like when the bridge comes and the chords change direction. You have a nice voice and I love the relaxed feel of the whole thing.
Constructive Comments: It feels like this song needs more of a “destination” musically and lyrically. I don’t hear any repeated musical or lyrical hooks, so it leaves your listener hanging. It’s not that you need a “chorus” as such but to focus the “Point” of your song…I guessed by the end it was “Quiet times” but this is such a lovely hook, you should have played with it a little more.