Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Try It Again
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: This has a lovely loose but lively vibe. The arrangement is well played and quite well produced with all parts clear. I love the chord progressions, the vocals and backing vocals and the way the arrangement builds. Some great playing here.
Constructive Comments: Songwriters starting songs by saying they’re finding it hard to write – I feel your pain! I read recently though that this is not a route to your listener’s heart – because they’re usually not songwriters so it’s hard to create empathy and I’m inclined to agree. It took me a while to realise which part of the song was the main hook, so putting more of a spotlight on this will really make the song shine.