Broadjam Artist: Dallas Marshall
Song: I’m So Lonely (without you)
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: Love the retro 80’s sound and it’s great to hear some fresh chord-progressions. You have a clear verse chorus structure that was easy to follow and you have a firm grip on your arrangement too, with some really vibrant sounds.
Constructive Comments: You’ve got far too many lyric cliches here – I’m so lonely without you – What am I supposed to do ? I would suggest that is something you work on. The style of the song didn’t feel like it matched the mood of the lyrics either, so perhaps a lyric re-write with a different theme might be something to consider. Good luck!