Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Joy
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: This is a jolly song that has the feel of a novelty pop record. You have two simple chord patterns that you repeat and that fit together with a different feel which is good.
Constructive Comments: There are two things I would suggest. Firstly, that you edit this song down. A pop song in this genre should be between 3 and 4 minutes long (maximum). Secondly, consider re-working the lyrics. You have a lot of very obvious rhymes in there and these days, rhymes are much more sophisticated, even in the pop genre. It seems that you’ve aimed to rhyme instead of saying what your song is about. Good luck!